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PostSubject: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:57 pm

Name: Tesei Utakata

Nickname: Zatoichi

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Weapons: Anything produced via shadows

Personality: Tesei is a very courteous person, who judges people just based off what his other senses tell him and how they treat him. He is a bit of a slacker, but he knows when its time to stop the laziness and step it up. He is protective of people who actually treat him normally, while very aggressive towards people who look down on him or think he is weak from his lack of eyesight. He also has a minor perverted streak.

Physical Appearance http://fav.me/d4sj7g6 He wears the typical Arrancar outfit of a white coat over a black robe-style outfit. His hair is white and messy, with a general style able to discerned. Across his eyes is his mask fragment, covering a scar across his eyes from his past. Around his neck is a necklace with a small yin/yang symbol. A scar is also discernible across his neck.

Bio: As a human, tesei had a normal childhood until one night a man broke in and took him hostage. The man demanded everything the family had for my life. When they had all the money and goods, the man slaughtered them in front of his eyes. Bringing the knife he used to kill them, he said “I always keep my promises, so you live.” Slashing quickly, he took out Tesei's right eye. “Now you see me,” The man uttered. He slashed across his nose and cut the other eye. 'Now you dont.” He finished. Sitting in his house, with nothing at all, Tesei vowed vengeance against the man. After training for many years to kill the man, he found out where he was at age 16. Going into his house, Tesei found poetry in Braille on the walls and a handrail straight to him. Following it, he found the man who killed his parents and eyesight. He asked for forgiveness, any way he could repay Tesei. Tesei said that the mans death would suffice. Obliging, the man quickly stabbed into his own heart. Giving the blade a quarter turn, he was dead before he touched the ground. Realizing what he had done, Tesei found the blade and slit his own throat. As a Hollow, he still could not see, so he would lie in wait for a hollow to think he was weak and take them out. When he became an Arrancar, his sight remained gone, but his other senses were enhanced to the extreme. He is high up in the Espada due to his strength and ingenuity in battle, along with a certain cunning.

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Name: Obscuridad Absoluta

Sealed form: Sealed within a non-descript black cane. With a 6 inch handle and 48 inch blade. The blade has a distinct mirror-like quality, with a razor sharp blade.

Resurrección: His mask fragment turns black, with the locations his eyes would be covered in white along with a slash mark that goes across both eyes, while the mask also covers his upper jaw with a sharp-toothed facsimile of a wolfs jaw. Across his throat, a small white slash mark forms. His arms get covered in the same black bones, with the elbows extending into sharp points. His nails turn into claws, which are pure-white. His chest and legs are also covered in this black bone substance, with an outline of a heart with stitches at the edge and a slash through it over where his heart would be. Using his shadow and any nearby shadows, he is able to form weapons or use it to attack an enemy. Can also be used to bind an enemy in place for another to finish said enemy off. If his shadow is attacked, it can cause small amounts of damage to Tesei.


Call out phrase: Blackout!! Obscuridad Absoluta

Any abilities/techniques:Unending darkness: Causes the target to be surrounded by shadows, blocking their sight of everything. Other senses aren't affected. Is dispersed as soon as Tesei is hit. Can only block an area fifty meters around the intended target.

Shadow Destruction: Any damage Tesei does to a persons shadow is afflicted on them. Will not sever limbs, but will cause light gashes. Will not work on inanimate objects. Requires reiatsu to be channeled in to the blade to work.

Cero Obscuridad: Tesei gathers together a cero before dashing it past a shadow. The shadows leap onto the cero, compressing it while Tesei pumps more reiatsu into it. The cero grows more slowly now as all the reiatsu is still compressed by the shadows. When it reaches regular size, Tesei fires it off, the compression rendering the reiatsu into a brilliant opalescent bright blue. Intermingled in the fired beam are shadows, which allow Tesei to control the cero in a fashion.

Midnight Sun: Tesei gathers a great amount of shadows in his hand, channeling reiatsu into the mass. The shadows quickly rotate while staying in a small sphere, until they generate an intense flame. After this, he aims the burst at an enemy and fires it at an insane speed, where upon contact or the user's discretion, it explodes into a great ball of black flames.

Statistics
Hoho (speed) - 6
Zanjutsu (Art of the sword or weapon) - 7
Reiryoku (Spiritual energy) - 5
Kido (Way of the spirit) - 6
Hakudo (Physical combat) - 5
Hankou (Resistance) - 6
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Total points: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:15 pm

The physical appearance has to be written as well as a written description of the zanpakuto, but the pictures can remain.

Also, you haven't technically been approved for the position stated within your profile, as an admin or co-admin hasn't approved it nor has the proper amount of time passed for a mod to approve it.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:53 am

This profile has been used without approval. To avoid this profile and it's posts from being regarded as invalid, or even deleted, the profile needs editting. The sealed form of the zanpakto must be described. The ability of the zanpakto is also too similar to Kyoraku's zanpakto's implicit ability to travel in shadows so this needs to be changed.

Until these things are fixed, Tesei Utakata is frozen. Any posts made after this date and time with this character are invalid (No one will delete them though so just fix this asap please and all will be well Very Happy )

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:06 pm

How's this?

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:08 pm

Not to be a pest or anything but dont you have to try out for this position?
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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:14 pm

Kenpachi he's tried out for it already, the issue was his profile was never approved by a mod or admin and he needed to make edits. Please do not stick your nose into our business, thanks ^.^

As for the change, I'll let Nyc or Mugetsu handle approving the profile.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:15 pm

Yup, it's good as long as the Shadow Destruction ability isn't in place all the time, as in it needs to be activated.

He did, a long time ago. Stay out of admin business please, Kenpachi.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:36 pm

Sorry but due to recent modifications in the rules you will need to remove the shadow stepping ability and replace it with something else, the modification will need to be approved in the Profile Modification Thread.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:37 pm

Athagaraz. This app has yet to be fully approved from what I've read of the replies. As you should know, no posting is allowed for a character UNTIL their application has been approved. Please refrain from posting and fix up your app till it is completely approved and given the go ahead.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:46 pm

You should probably just pm him. -__- He probably hasn't even seen this yet because apparently no one keeps eyes on their profiles. e.e

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:51 pm

I did PM him about it -_- When I first made the post, I reposted as a bump and deleted the other one so It didn't seem to douchey e.e

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:00 pm

Well let him know that his character is frozen until he makes the necessary changes.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:01 pm

Alright, I'll PM him again.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:58 pm

Why is it I can never keep the freakin ability? Had to change it once, now again. Fun.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:02 am

I've been trying to avoid this, but I'm in a mood where I don't really care any more e.e

You use that ability /way/ to damn much anyway, to the point I consider it god modding. Now the decision wasn't based on that, it was completely unrelated because in a cannon setting no zanpakuto share abilities unless the characters are related; Hence why we made the decision.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:06 am

Also, I made a mistake when approving before. x.x Sorry.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:23 am

In response to Kizo, the ability sucks in nearly every other aspect due to the fact it meant for that. Especially considering tge original was only the warp with a bit more distance.

To Mugetsu, Can we be a little more clear next time? Not to be an ass but this is a little irritating

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:26 am

I did not understand that at all ._. But, the point is not to spam the living hell out of an ability which allows for such an easy evasion of an attack, you end up looking like a dick. >.>

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:30 am

My character's blind, what do you want from me? You kinda a bit of leg up with that. Also, that has been a bit of a staple of this character for as long as I've used him. So I generally just use when possible. Also the abuse of it against Zamder was on purpose. I get only five lines for nearly a whole fight, I tend to try to provoke.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:36 am

Be more creative? >.> Tousen was blind but he didn't do something like that o.e Mainly because as far as I know(Don't think he had any other abilities, idgaf because I don't like Tousen e.e) he didn't have any but he trained himself to be able to dodge attacks effectively.

I've got a pet peeve about spammed attacks though e.e

Yeah that is an issue..But, something like that will cause drama we admins and mods need to clean up, so just be careful when trying to do something like that >.<

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:40 am

Sorry about that. But I can most definitely operate without it. Apparently I drew from Tousen without having gotten far enough to do so, as Tesei has the enhanced senses. Just when I feel spiteful, I begin to try to draw more writing from a person. With hearse, I can barely tell what the he'll just happened the way he writes. Really wish I could figure out how exactly to get a good description from that jumbled mess.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:42 am

I know x.x He needs to work on it e.e Oi why can't people grasp the whole literate RP thing? e.e Makes me want to hit people >.>

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:45 am

No idea. Apparently setting a bar for standard just attracts those who will limbo right under it. I do tge best I can and if I ever need a vouch for being able to work without shadow warp, ask Dalaga. He saw a few of my other ways of doing so.

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:47 am

I have no doubt you can function without it, Kizo only uses it in dire situations anyway e.e

But yeah e.e Well hopefully he'll straighten up e.e

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PostSubject: Re: Tesei Utakata (Arrancar)   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:50 am

Hopefully. Think we should just tell him straight learn to write better than a four year old with a crayon? How do think that would go over?

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