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PostSubject: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:11 pm

Name: Halrow Ginch
Nickname: Halrow
Age: 329 appears to be 25
Gender: Male
Weapon(s): none
Number: Fraccion to espada number 3.

Personality: Loyal to Kali he trusts him with everything. Halrow generally is talkative and freely expresses his opinion. If your ideals do not match his Halrow will arrogantly argue until procen wrong. His mask covering most of his face destroys most facial expression. The only indication of his mood his the position of his eyes which always seemrelaxed. He talks to most with respect until he finds them unworthy in his eyes for such treatment.

Physical Appearance: Height: 7'4 Weight:210lbs|Eye color: light brown|Hair color: black|Attire: He wears typical Arrancar clothes: a white jacket, black sash, and a white hakama. However, his jacket seems to have longer coattails than others, and the collar is rather high. His black oily hair is slicked back in a messy loose approach. His mask covers the lower half of his face from nose bridge to jaw. Jagged teeth on the mask form a smile as certain parts of the mask are chipped. His body type is a slim muscular almost lanky type figure.

Bio: He was a like any normal hollow until he became an arrancar. He fought day in and day out. Struggling to stay alive another day he found it very surprising as an arrancar that he managed to live up to this point. Halrow didn't kill for the joy or to show acts of cruelty. He fought to survive. He had no need for senseless violence. Halrow didn't want to be the creator of pain. Far from it. When he became an arrancar his mindset altered. He was strong, but there were many ahead of him. Beyond his level. Halrow only then decided to survive longer he needed to better himself in every manner, but he didn't know where to start. One day he meet Kali who oddly enough offered a position as his fraccion. Halrow hesitantly accepted giving Kali his undying loyalty.

Zanpakutō

Call out phrase: "Aging Huesos"

Name: Ginnjo Uahist
Sealed form: A plain white 5ft katana simple in design only having a blue streak running down the blade. The guard having a bony like structure as the hilt is patterned with a white zig-zag pattern and a seemingly continuous blue streak.

Resurrección: His strength, speed and ability to use cero's will increase.

His mask forms into a hood like helmet as it covers his eyes. His entire face is covered by his mask while in his resurrección state. His body will alter to a humanoid state. His hands and feet will turn talon like as a white cloak wraps around his body in layers. His simple katana shatters. The fallen peices will then start to reassemble into a black 6'7ft scythe. It closely follows the shape of a spine with every vertibra longens to form the scythe. A red streak flows in and out of the scythe as it coils around the shaft. While in this form he can twist and move his body in many ways that would normally leave the host unable to use the body part.


"Age Amígo" The scythe will extend using a whip like motion the longest it could extend is a mile.
"Descanse En Paz" his scythe will spin around his body as parts of the scythe while still spinning at high speeds lash out towards his opponents.
"Sacrifice La Vidà" With this technique Halrow turns the scythe up side-down as he denses his reiatsu before slashing upwards launching a white colored projectile.


Statistics

Hoho (speed) -2
Zanjutsu (Art of the sword or weapon) -3
Reiryoku (Spiritual energy) -2
Kido/cero (Way of the spirit) -1
Hakudo (Physical combat) -3
Hankou (Resistance) -3
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Total points:14


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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:15 pm

You need a lot more detail on just about everything. Especially personality and bio, which should both be a least a paragraph in length.

Also, you start at a D rank if you don't try out, so you only get 14 stat points for now.

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 1:12 am

Updated it

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 1:29 am

Could you space the Personality, Appearance and Bio? It makes it hard to read...Also I don't see the release phrase for your zanpakuto.

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 1:41 am

By release do you mean call out phrase
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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 1:47 am

Yeah, typically the call out phrase isn't listed right before an attack >>

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 1:55 am

What do you mean? Xp
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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 2:04 am

Well....Here

http://bleacheoorp.canadian-forum.com/t128-ursulina-schiffer-arrancar

See how that profile is done up? Maybe try arranging it like that, the call out phrase is what you use when releasing your Zanpakuto.

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 3:05 am

Fixed it I spose'.
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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 3:25 am

Actually the zanpakuto section should look more like this >.>

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 7:45 am

The only thing I'm seeing wrong with this right now is the release command or call out phrase. Like Kizo said, it isn't the names of techniquess. It's separate....

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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 7:19 pm

Sorry I'm busy with testing. Got some time to fix it though! o3o
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PostSubject: Re: Halrow Ginch {Arrancar}   Tue May 01, 2012 7:22 pm

Approved. ^_^

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