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PostSubject: Kaede Soshi WIP   Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:22 am

*Name: Kaede Soshi
Nickname: The Dancing Samurai
*Age:368 (Looks 25)
*Gender: male
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*Personality:
Ok people the first thing everyone needs to know is this! Kaede is a hero!! Well at least that’s how he sees him self. He views him self as a one man army hell bent on protecting those who can’t protect themselves, a light against the darkness, a fighter of the wicked and gods gift to woman kind all rolled up into one astounding bundle! As you can probably guess this man has no lack of self confidence, in fact he nearly oozes the stuff (GROSS >.>)!! Its actually gotten sooo bad that others around him start to feel the effects….Hell the most depressed self loathing kid starts to actually feel GOOD about them selves just with the guy near by! He claims it’s a talent (I say it’s a disease!) that he’s cultivated over the years….Most people say he’s full of shit.

The second thing you need to know is actually rather simple!! Dancing equals life! At least for an extrovert like Kaede, the dance is a metaphor for his life, the way he chooses to live it, and how he reacts to others. He moves through his life with fluidity, reacting and acting in time with music only he can hear. This makes him an odd individual to watch because he always seems to be moving, even when standing perfectly still.

The third thing you must know is this! Kaede is…a little out there. IF he was rich people would call him eccentric, but since he’s not people have been known at time to call the poor man crazy! This may not be entirely unfounded words considering his odd habit of striping at the most inopportune times, but that’s the limit! He’s not unstable or insane….He just has a unique way of looking at the world, and some rather awkward mannerisms that make it hard to function in polite society.

The last thing everyone needs to know is this and it may be the most important, everything he does he does out of love! Whether for his nation, his friends, or oddest of all that random feeling of attachment you some times feel for that random stranger on the street. This love is what drives him, fuels him, and makes him who and what he is! Now that isn’t to say he loves EVERYONE but it’s a close thing. He can feel kinship with just about any person he meets no matter their occupation, social standing or culture.


*Physical Appearance:Ok so when some one says super hero, the first thing your likely to imagine is a man(Or woman) Wearing tight spandex, a cap, and have their underwear on the outside, who’s features are unmarked by blemishes or scars(Which is remarkable considering how much punishment they must take). Well im happy to say Kaede doesn’t hold to this stereotype!! In fact he isn’t even a superhero (Though don’t tell him that…he’s likely to get upset) he’s your average six foot eleven Japanese man.

Ok I guess average is a misnomer; there are few things average about him. From his blind right eye, to the pins he habitually wears in his hair he defiantly makes an odd sight as he strides down the street, a ready smile on his face and a sparkle in his good eye. The cloths he wears(When he can manage to keep them on) on any given day depends entirely on what hes doing, if hes working well hes wearing his uniform and katana, if its just the average day he could be wearing any number of things from a sweats to three piece suit or even if the mood strikes him hakama.

Now most people would expect a man of his stature to be a man of serious demeanor, but by and large there couldn’t be anything farther from the truth. The timber of his voice is soft, sweet and joking. His walk is relaxed, springy and full of energy. All in all hes not nearly as intimidating as he could be most of the time, and most find him rather pleasing to be around.

*Bio:

Zanpakutō

*Name:Odoru chō (Dancing Butterfly)
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*Shikai: (appearance and powers)
*Call out phrase: Dance your Life away, Odoru Chō!!
*Any abilities/techniques: (4 maximum, any techniques not included may not be used)

Bankai (must have been approved through RP sample first)

*Bankai name: Jigoku no odori no chō ( butterfly of the infernal dance)
*Bankai description: (appearance and powers)
*Any abilities/techniques: (4 maximum, any techniques not included may not be used)

Inner Hollow

*Name of inner hollow:Seimei no ori-te(Life's Weaver)
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Appearance:
*Hollow mask: (describe what it looks like and how it increases the power of your character)

*Statistics

Hoho (speed) - 3
Zanjutsu (Art of the sword or weapon) -3
Reiryoku (Spiritual energy) - 3
Kido/cero (Way of the spirit) - 3
Hakudo (Physical combat) - 4
Hankou (Resistance) - 5
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Total points:21


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PostSubject: Re: Kaede Soshi WIP   Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:25 pm

I know this is WIP, but I have a few suggestions to point out before anyone else does.

First off, I remember Mugetsu saying Vizard positions are limited. You should talk with her to see if theres an open spot (If you've done this step already, Good job!)

Second, you should write your gender fully. a Simple "M" can stand for many things, such as Male, Man, Mom, Monkey, Mermaid, Mistletoe, etc. So be sure to specify.

I love your Bio. It's fun. But your height, dear god, he's a giant.

Anyways, I look forward to what else you will add.

For any other mods viewing this, I CALL DIBS ON THIS PROFILE D:<

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PostSubject: Re: Kaede Soshi WIP   Tue Jun 19, 2012 5:10 pm

All i got from your suggestions is that your a RACIST!! What the hell do you have against giant freaking monkeys hmm?
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PostSubject: Re: Kaede Soshi WIP   Wed Jun 20, 2012 9:59 am

Well.... Giant Freaking Monkeys equal Giant Freaking Monkey Poop. Giant Freaking Monkey Poop Equals Global Stinking. Global Stinking equals Toxic Air. Toxic Air Equals America nuking the monkeys. America Nuking the Monkeys mean Monkeys flinging Giant Freaking Monkey Poop over continents. Giant Freaking Monkey Poop All over the world means The End of the World.


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