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PostSubject: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Feb 27, 2012 9:51 pm

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This is where you post your role-play sample to become a captain, Espada, or sin; obtain a visored or canon character, or obtain a bankai. You can only try out for one character at a time.

The RP sample can have any kind of setting, situation, or character. If you're trying out for a canon character, you must use the character you are trying out for in the sample.

There is no specfied length that it has to be, as quality is more important than quantity, but the longer it is, the better.

Post your sample in this topic and wait to be approved or disapproved. If you are disapproved, you cannot tryout again for a week. There are no third chances.


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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:11 pm

Marrock-


It seemed so vastly lonely, just as it was cold and empty. The night sky had crept up faster than usual, the stars were slowly fading. The constallations that once roamed the far stretches of this dark blanket, where gone, scattered like the memories of the past, broken. It conveyed through her deep busom, that the lady night seemed much more meloncally than usuall. As a glimmering plate of light embraced the night around her, a queen of darkness, and the Princess of the moon were almost in harmony, they fitted together: A deep black background with a painted beauty of light to make her glow. The deep night's gentle gust even held the clouds at bay, for a cluster had been scattered just beyond the edges of the moon and a good area around her. The light of the full moon was bright enough to shine down like a beam on this rather eerie night.

As a strong gust of wind swept through a mass of empty streets, a strong fog was being brought in. The mist covering the ground from the knee up, spreading quickly untio the streets and nearly bringing the the city of Karakura into a cloak of clouds. In the down town section of the city, the buildings were tall, they flourished in great stature and rose so high that they almost reached the heavens. Stack upon one another, from side to side and all around, with the windows clean enough to mirror the reflection of light given by the moon. There was a long row of these buildings, all so similar and dark, the main street below was one long strip of fog, and closed in were street lamps. A brilliant orange hue illuminated the light fog, which placed a beam of bronze light in perfect circles. Like a spot light they brightened only that spot, the rest went into completel darkness.

A flush of silver hair was barretted by the wind, yet even with the powerful gust it kept its shape. In the darkness, through the shadows of death, a sillhoutted man was slowly coming forward. His hair the first most noticable feature, as he came closer to the light of the moon an ominous feel was surrounding him, that every step he took was one step closer to the cold grasp of death. An aura that reached out, much like a hand, to grasp at your soul with its icy fingers, and tear it away in one fowl swoop. This aura outlined him, it was invisible but yet it was there like the wind, surroudning him. The man stepped into the light of a lamp post, its bronze glow washing over him with a shower of bronze light, illuminating his otherwise dark features. He was a shinigami, a captain rank that was sent on patrol.

He stepped beneath the bronze light and his attire became clear. A white Haori hung about his shoulders, the sleeves were tight around his arms, the fully white haori hugged his form and his curves, tied tightly at the center of his waist with a sash. His hair, which was as silver as mercury, or more so as the very moon his eyes had engaged. It hung to his shoulders with a natural silky texture, yet it didnt move. Like a frame around his face, his hair covered the edges and made it him appear sleek. It barely swayed when he walked. He wore combat boots, opposed to the normal clogs or sandals that the others wore, he had them for a special purpose. His facial features were quite handsome, not perfect; but his jaw was strong, and slender, his slightly small and a very smooth pale, just bright than the handsomely pale skin he had. A kin to training so much in the dark. He even adopted a blindfold, made or pure black, which was tied neatly among the strands of his hair. When without it he was to slow, the only way to speed up was to simply close his eyes, and use other senses.

The haori was rather slimming, but still beneath it he had a large body, the perect size. He wasn't bulky, he wasn't skinny or all bones. He had a hardened body, that was slender at the stomach and wide at the chest. Besides those minor details the one thing that stood out was a blade on his back. The form protruded out from behind his shoulder, and hung just inches from the ground below. An eight foot sword, wieghted more at the top for a cleaner cut. A black cord was wrapped around the hilt, with silver rayskin, the diamond markings that go up the handle of the sword. At the end of the handle, a chain was hanging off the side, with a small cresent moon figure dangling about. The guard looked ordinary, a lotus blooming in the center, with a ring around its petals, and pure black. Above the spacer, the blade rested with an edge sharper than any other, not a nick, or scratch, yet just from the look it was used in more than a hundred battles. The handle was also very long nearly two feet, with the swords eight foot blade, it was an overwhelming weapon.

He strolled along passing through street lamps, slowly going into portals of light and disapearing, then like magic he was at the next lamp post. He was walking beneath the light, other wise surrounded by the dark air of the night, the slow fog that covered his feet, and only fortune would have the lady of the moon above him. That was when he stopped, with buildings as tall as the sky on either side of him, he felt the world go tinted with a grey light. He sensed something, a tremendous power level, something that couldn't be from one person alone. His head followed the sense upwards, to see a rip in the sky, agains the black background it was nearly impossible to sit, that is until... A large face peered out of it, with a blank expression and beaty red eyes, a long pointed nose, a pair of gigantic hands reached through tearing the sky open as if it were a physical thing, as if solid. It was a-

"Menos Grande." He said solemly, he was a captain, something as stupid as a menos would be little trouble, the only thought that came to mind was then was, "What was that power, it's still here." He can feel it, brushing against his own, and as of right now his power had been sealed, to less than nearly fifeteen times what it normal was. He stepped back, taking in a sharp breath to assess the situation, there must be something else around. The hands tore the portal open, and a large white boot flung out, the menos entered this world, and he had gotten a glimpse just beyond that menos, more faces, many more of them, all very similar to the menos that now stood above the buildings. He reached up with his left hand grabbing the sword hilt, and pulling forward, the back piece of the blade dragged along his shoulder as he swung it forward a red glow had formed, the meno's was walking forward its mouth closed but a ball of swirling red energy had formed at its mouth, an estimated size of a car no less."....." He stared out, using a small amount of spirit pressure to feel the energy, the way the wind was being sucked in by this tremendous blast.

He stepped forward as the menos unleashed the cero, with that step he swung his blade down; letting it collide with the full beam of spirit energy. The long blade sliced straight through its gallant red power, the beam splitting and going full force behind him, yet he kept his arm outstretched, without effort he finally jerked his arm forward releasing a small blast of energy, slicing straight up the beam and straight through the Menos, its form was split in half from the very bottom to top, and the two halves fell to the ground. The buildings were crumbling behind him, the street was a large crater with the only thing left was where he had blocked the attack. He didn't even have time to rest before the hole in the sky was torn to bring in a line of faces, all the same, all meno's. There were at least five, and one by one they stepped out into the human world, crushing bulding's, as they were focused around the captain. He couldnt let another cero go off, he needed to keep the damage to a minimum.

Just as he released a breath a symphony of red appeared in the sky, one after the other, it appear almost beautifully, he used a flash step. The man appeared directly above the middle meno's, lets call him one. The first meno's was moving its head left to right, while the other four, which he deliberatly let them see his flash step, all turned and at the peak of their power released their cero. Before the attacks could hit he was gone, vanishing beyond sight, the four cero's were fired into the air, gigantic beams of light shot nearly in one direction fired straight into space. An enourmous wind was sent spiraling upwards around the four beams, until finally they came to a stop. One, the first meno's had fallen, the captain standing on its face with his blade through its head, it only took seconds but the thing faded away like killing a normal hollow.

He flashed forward, to the next blade wasn't wide enough to cut straight thorugh but with his own spirirt energy added to it the blade cut through the second meno's like a searing knife through hot butter. Before that one could even fall, he was diving down the mid section of the last on to the right, his blade stabbed into its torso as he used gravity to pull him down, splitting the giant in two. The last two meno's were trying to escape, to leave through the portal, and the almost made it too. Almost. He raised his hand, his fingers out stretched to cover his face, he waved it passed and a mask formed, of dense bone and odd shape, the mask was completely black, it resembled a skull, with white slanted sockets, empty of course, though they looked angry. A mouth that was as sharp as nails, and held an evil grin, the kind of grin that savored a fresh tasting soul.

Marrock smiled, beneath his mask as the two meno's began to escape, everything slowed down, he was faster, much, much faster. He could process things quicker, his mind was sharper than ever before, and so he charged his body covered in a mass of silver light he charge through the sky, as a white line blazing passed the two Meno's, and straight through them. He had swung at least a dozen times before he reached the end of the first, and two dozen after that. The two meno's were almost in peices before he had reached them from the sheer raw power of a captain with a mask, the dozen's of strikes felt a little like over kill. The remains of anything ever being there were gone, and he was left in its wake, falling, or rather floating to the surface, his mask floating off into shreds of black flame, he stood at center of the street and looked up to the sky, dreading his job."Another boring patrol... Im going home."

With his form sillhouted, the horizen was turning a bright white, the sky began to turn blue, the morning was coming, the night patrol was over and the captain was going home, he opened the gate into the seriete, two wooden like doors that slid open infront of him, he walked through and before he had to face the light of day shut them tight, right when a beam of sunlight hit them, he flash stepped to his barracks, and made his way to his room, finding it and laying in bed to sleep the night away.
[i just added that last crappy paragrapgh in so it could be 12 the captain i wanna be of, ye feel ;]
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:21 pm

You're approved. Very well done. Since Meep hasn't been on since yesterday, I assume you two haven't arranged a fight yet. Do you want to wait for his response or take another squad?

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:28 pm

oh right iforgot about that, well ima arrange a fight, but hmm hey is the assassin squad still available?
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:33 pm

Squad 2? No. The available squads are shown in the Gotei 13 topic in the Soul Society forum.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:42 pm

hm is the Lt in squad 2 open?
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:44 pm

Go read the thread and see? e.e

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:44 pm

okay ill arrange a fight with squad 2 then, the captain i guess
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:47 pm

Can't you just take a squad that's open? o.o There are tons. When people fight for captaincy, it's bound to cause drama. n.n

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:49 pm

well those are the only two cool ones besides royal guard T.T
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:51 pm

Why not be the squad 4 captain? c: Lol, jk. xD Well Kido corps is still open. o.o That's cool. you would have access to any kido, even the forbidden. Though using forbidden kido isn't a good idea. o.o

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:54 pm

Im a hand to hand kenpachi like type, i love swords and fighting, and as cool as kido... you know what yeah okay ill be the kido captain... i perfect mix of combat and magic... or whatever kido is.
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:57 pm

You better look up the kido list then. o.o There's a link in the rules topic. Don't forget you have to make a barracks and captain's office for the kido corps once your profile is approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:59 pm

i have before i remember i liked some kido, if im the kido captain could i pretty much pwn people with my kido? and make my own types of kido?
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:05 pm

Well you couldn't auto, and you couldn't perform high-level kido in succession, as your character would tire rapidly. You can't make your own kido though. the ones that are missing from the list will be created later by myself and the mods. When that time comes, you can chip in too if you wish.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:09 pm

im the kido captain sure ill chip in just give me the idea's you got and ill give my opinion
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:11 pm

The list isn't getting done until this RP is well on it's way. Even though you're the kido captain, I am still the admin. I approve the kido, and make the list. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:18 pm

yesh i agree with you... oh wait did i sound like i was going to veto you lmao my bad no way! Im just here to pitch in, im sure there's enough for me to work with any way!
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:23 pm

All righty, lol. ^^ Sorry if I sound defensive some times, but this is my first time running a legit forum, so I want to make sure nothing can ruin it. >.<

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:31 pm

oh sweet i was about to ask if you ran this place, or if this was your first time! ^^ I noticed theres a lot of un-found spells, ill definatly help out with em! maybe even some of the incantations too. Ive always had my character as a fighter, hence the long sword and pretty buff body, like the perfect combination of speed and strength not to much of either, well maybe strength my hero is Kisuke and Kenpachi.. so yeah lmao im not sure what else to talk abotu
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:33 pm

Cheah, I run it like a baws. xD I'm a melee fighter too. o.o Long-range just doesn't do it for me. I'll be in the chat box though. :O We're all chillin' in there. xD

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:37 pm

yeah idk i just dont like long range, it always seemed the same, energy blast... spam spam spam spam spam spam spam! its blah
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:39 pm

Yeah. e.e Then when you get close to them, they try to distance themselves again. . . that is when I go hardcore and trap them. when I'm pissed, my RP fighting is horrifyingly brutal. o.o'

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:41 pm

I like those slow brutal moves, liked bam.... wait for it... bam... wait for it... dead! I nearly broke this one guys neck in a fight, but ya know guid lines and all and your not allowed to destroy they're entire body in one brutal, massive strike, pshhh they shouldn't be so weak!
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:45 pm

Heh, well it comes down to who is more skilled. xD Anyways, we should stop posting here. >.> It's for tryouts, lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Fri Mar 02, 2012 11:52 pm

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