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PostSubject: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Feb 27, 2012 9:51 pm

First topic message reminder :

This is where you post your role-play sample to become a captain, Espada, or sin; obtain a visored or canon character, or obtain a bankai. You can only try out for one character at a time.

The RP sample can have any kind of setting, situation, or character. If you're trying out for a canon character, you must use the character you are trying out for in the sample.

There is no specfied length that it has to be, as quality is more important than quantity, but the longer it is, the better.

Post your sample in this topic and wait to be approved or disapproved. If you are disapproved, you cannot tryout again for a week. There are no third chances.


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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 23, 2012 1:59 pm

~Approved for B rank captain. What squad?

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 23, 2012 3:24 pm

Squad 12: Research and Development.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 23, 2012 3:26 pm

All righty. After your profile is made, be sure to make your squad barracks and captain's office.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 23, 2012 4:24 pm

I know the drill. XD Luckily i saved my profile, all i need to do is copy and paste. XP

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 23, 2012 4:34 pm

Yeah, true. xD

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Sun May 27, 2012 2:35 am

~=| Shinji Hirako - Captain of Fifth Division |=~

Normally a Shinigami had no reason to be in the Realm of the Living, but this was an exception. Of course any Shinigami could go to Karakura Town or any place in the world, that they wanted, if they had no work that day. That would have been nice, to come to Karakura, in a time where Shinji-San could observe humans and their behavior even further. That sounds pretty odd, considering the fact that he was human at one point, but he has forgotten what it meant to be "human." Many things had changed since his time as a human, and people got even greedier and much more ignorant, when it came to conserving money. He would never understand this, regardless of how much time he spent reading up on it, or observing it. Naturally though, when entering the Realm of the Living, one must be in Gigai form.

Shin-San was not familiar with Gigai, directly, but he had heard of it and seen people use it. As for personal experience, he had none so this was a "first" for him. A little grey ball had been handed to him before he departed from Soul Society, which he held onto tightly, when he passed through the Dangai, trying to avoid the cleaner. The cleaner was a nasty beast, would devour anyone that wasn't supposed to be in the Precipice world, and it was incredibly fast at that. Powerful, and has speed? That was a deadly combination, which is exactly why he had to hold onto his Gigai "tablet" tightly as he ran through the Dankai, to a portal that would lead him to the Human World.

Once the stress of being chased was off his shoulders, he was much more relaxed; and he was ready to rest, before the big mission that he was about to participate in. A slow descent from the portal that hovered above Karakura was nice. It gave him time to catch his breath and chill out, but it also offered another thing - a chance to view the town. Shinji hadn't really visited Karakura Town since he had become captain again - and he was curious now to see what all had changed, if anything - yet. More buildings, that is the only thing he noticed, that and more graveyards. Everything was similar though, but he did notice there was a huge mall now, which was non-existent a few years back. At any rate, his feet touched the asphalt and he began to observe his surroundings. Trees, fences, pretty houses and cars. Those were things he wasn't used to, but he had to adjust or he would be seen as a "loon." Immediately after reaching the ground though, he swallowed his Gigai tablet, hiding his real body with his spiritual energy.

As he roamed the streets, he noticed many things that had changed with the women, which was something he WOULD notice. Once a womanizer, always one, is how he thought. His thought process was different though, compared to males nowadays, and always. The idea of sex itself ran through his head constantly, usually blocking out all other thought processes. Most people look down on his sexual appetite, but what they don't know is that if he met the "right girl," he would change immediately. That really didn't matter though, he noticed girls were a lot prettier now, and taller, and seemed very nice and delicate. He had to continue roaming though, to see if he could find the man he was coming to Karakura Town to recruit, for his mission to Hueco Mundo. From what he had read about this exiled Shinigami, however, would mean he would be stuck in Karakura for days. This guy was illusive, so he would be hard to find - even with the ability to sense spiritual pressures, it would still be difficult.

Up ahead was something that Shinji wanted to venture, a shopping mall. There were malls back in his time as a human, but they were small. This was like all the general stores he visited as a child, but at on a monumental scale - which was really interesting. The architecture was not brilliant by any means, like ancient cultures and their amazing builds, but it was still beautiful nonetheless. Doors that opened automatically, that was new, and was certainly years ahead of the technology from his life. This place was an exciting area of town, so he assumed, as there were plenty of "young" people there, hanging out. This had to be the cool place in town, even though it didn't matter to Shin-San, he was the coolest. In his own right he was "cool," because he was a Shinigami; and that is more than any human can say, at this point in their life. As he entered the mall, he could sense a spiritual pressure that was unfamiliar to him, and raised some of his suspicions. Why would a power of this magnitude be in a mall? Was it hostile, or was it merely a human escaping his situation with his powers, and trying to join "reality?" That didn't matter, he had to find out who this "mystery human" was. He began his walk over to the person, they were on the other side of the store, more than likely from what Hirako could sense, the food court. As he neared the being, he called out to him. "Hey don'cha think it is a bit unwise to be sitting alone in such a dangerous world like this?
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Sun May 27, 2012 3:18 am

Cliff hanger....Well...Are you ready for judgement..?

Right after this word from our sponsors!!

[Insert random, retarded commercial break here]

And we're back, so, are you ready to hear from the judges?

Oh...Seems it's not good news..? Oh, it's not bad news? Wait, I'm confused x.x Let's throw another pointless commercial break your way!!

[Insert random viagra/trojan condom commercial line up here]

Okay, I think we've finally gotten things settled...Right? *looks at judges* RIGHT? *Is holding sword out at them as they nod* Alright ^^ Sorry for such suspense folks, but it brings in ratings *laughs*


Okay, you've been waiting patiently for your judgement......And the answer is...........

APPROVED!! *Audience cheers* I'll give you A-Rank captain, please don't forget to make your barracks and read the RP system.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Sun May 27, 2012 3:25 am

*checking for capacha*

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 30, 2012 5:13 pm

Applying for starting rank at staff's discretion.

Rampage. With his eyes seeing only red and everything in his sight an enemy, Zyklus stormed through the school halls. Panicced students and staff fled from the roaring man, but it was no use. They had gone and pissed him off now. Can you believe that they thought giving him a vaccine would be a good idea? No! It freaking hurt! The injection point on his left shoulder burned, and he could feel the evil liquid course through his blood stream. Stomping over the smooth tiles of the floor, a black light glowed from his feet for a brief moment before the black combat boots shoot forward, taking Zyklus along with it and repositioning him in front of a large crowd. No longer was his regular body visible. Instead, a black liquid seemed to coat his body. Despite its appearance, it stayed firmly attached to his body, not a drop of it dripping. Sweeping his arm, a thin chord shot from his palm and sliced through numerous people, severing them quite cleanly. Smirking, he jumped in the air and used another tendril, this one erupting from his back, to hold himself onto the ceiling, it punching through the surface and wrapping onto a support beam.

He roared again, not capable of intelligible speech. Suddenly, something pinged against his skull. Looking down, he noticed a flatten circular piece of metal spin along the ground before dropping. Glancing back into the crowd, a thin stream of smoke was his clue. Someone actually had a gun. In school? God damn these hard times. Still, it wasn't very effective on him. His spiritual pressure was too much for a simple, human gun to penetrate. Using another tendril, he swung from his position and landed on the wall opposite him, behind the kid who shot him. He held himself there with another tentacle-esque appendage, withdrawing the previous two and simply using the one that was now generated from his hand, it placed fimly against the wall. Reaching down, he grabbed onto the screaming boy's head and began to squeeze, his hand slightly enlargened thanks to the black coat of spiritual energy around him that Zyklus liked to call Ubel. After a moment, the skull gave way, allowing blood and brain to fly omnidirectional from the pressure.

Things began to heat up as the wall beside him was devoured by flame, someone thinking it a wise idea to hold their lighter to the bulletin board that was nailed there. Screaming again, his mind began to come back to him as his rage was acted out. He took note of where he was, the blood that strained the six surfaces around him, and... smiled. Yes. This WAS fun. Dropping from the wall, he assumed his full height of five foot, ten inches (augmented slightly by Ubel, but not really worth noting), and howled once more. This time, it was followed by mad laughter. "You stupid humans can't kill me! I'm above you!" They ran again, cowering and screaming in fear for the thing trying to kill them.. Shooting another tendril from his outstretched palm, he grabbed onto a girl and yanking her back. Grabbing her by the throat, he held her against the flaming wall and watched as she burned, her skin sizzling and bubbling from the intense heat. When all that remained of her was charred bones and pieces of scorched skin and clothing, he dropped her.

Alright, he had had enough fun. It was time to get out of here before something that could kill him showed up. Turning to face the opposite direction of the fleeing facaulty, he began walking until he reached a large, panoramic window. This was a pretty decent school. He stopped right before the glass pane, watching the fire behind him reflect off of it for a few moments. There was probably a decent chemistry lab here. He could do some serious damage with that. Pondering it for a few moments as blood dripped from his blackened form, he shook his head. No. He had better things to do with his time. Besides, everyone had probably gotten out by now. There was no point. Placing his hand, palm flat, against the window, he pushed hard. The entire construct gave way, falling three stories to the ground before shattering into an infintismile amount of pieces. Stepping onto the ledge, he allowed two wings to emerge from his back, very basic in structure and the same color as Ubel.

Leaping, he flapped hard and achieved lift. He didn't actually know where he was going to go from here, but he knew wherever it was, he was going to have some fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed May 30, 2012 5:27 pm

~Approved for B rank. This means that you get 28 stat points to apply. Please read the RP system topic before doing so. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:13 am

"Sukaime-to" A male in his late twenties said. His voice was soft and smoothing, yet firm, like a nice and gentle, carefree being, but aggitated. Although annoyed, he didn't show it at first look, it was only present in his voice or someone who knew him well. As he spoke his eyes were closed and legs were crossed, he meditated sitting on top of the thick ocean... Yes ontop of the thick ocean. In this world the ocean was more densed compared to regular water. The water here was like Jello. The man sat for a while, as if he was waiting patiently for something. But it was apparent that what ever he waited for, if he even was waiting for something, was sure to come, for after a minute or two he smiled.

Strangely, the man wore a completely ivory green Shihakusho which complimented his tan skin, crimson red hair, and over all suroundings, which were a orange-red hue, resembling the sun setting sky. For in this world the sky and ground were one. If you were to shovel the dirt of this world with your bare hands you will have nothing but a hand full of sky in your possesion. The only odd ball of this world color-wise was the mans clothing and all the green trees, even the wooden stem of the trees seemed to be green. The trees grew out of any surface, whether it was the jello-like sky ocean or the sky-like ground, they still grew. The trees roots were visuable through the worlds surface so it appeared as if the tree were floating, even though they weren't.

"Ohh..." A young female suddenly appeared in the males lap. She then began to nibble on his neck. The girl was very slender, so much that she almost appeared unhealthy. The girl was flat chested and sported no "junk in the trunk" yet mantained a hour glass figure. This girl appeared no older than 12 and wore tattered jeans and a hoddie, both of which matched the main hue of the world, red-orange. Her hair was cut short, sloppy, and just plain old uneven, making it appear spiky, it fell into the jello sea like it was regular water. Continuing to nibble, when she reached the mans ear she whispered to him, "...Hai Kyuuten Hokousho, you're back."

"What are you doing, Sukaime-to?" The male, Hai, asked in the same annoyed mannor. He didn't appear shocked, as if Sukaime-to did this before.

"Don't act like you don't like it," Sukaime-to stated rubbing Hai's back, "it's okay, this is our world, the world of the Hai Kyuuten Hokousho's Zanpaktou. My world. Our world. therefore we make the rules of this land."[b]

[b]"No,"
He stood up as she fell into jello water with a splash. It would appear as if the water was normal for her but jello for Hai. She slowly sinked into the red sea, drowning. "Your a sickning drama queen, Sukaime-to... Show me my Bankai."

Air swiftly escaped from her lungs as bubbles floated to the waters surface from her gapping mouth. She then placed her hands around her neck, a common gesture for a person showing they couldn't breath. Yet she could breath, this was her domain, she was almost invincible. As the last bubble escaped her mouth, her lips contorted into a sinister smile.

"I am your Zanpaktou, your beloved partner, your one and only partner... so why wont you let me be your tool? Your love? Your one and only?" Her eyes began to tear up as she frowned.

"Fool," He shook his head, releasing a few tsk by sucking his teeth. "You are my to-- er, I wouldn't say tool, but faithful Zanpaktou. And since we can only have one Zanpaktou, you're obviously my one and only."

Sukaime-to clentched her teeth, "You skipped a part!" she shouted as her body stoped sinking. "Don't you love me!?" She continued to shout. Her eyes widened as her teeth grew into fangs.

"No, I don't love yo--" Hai was interupted by Sukaime-to's outbrust, "ARRGGGHHHH!!!!!" She screeched liked a dinosuar. Her body began to shake, like she was being shot by a machine gun. Regaining control of herself, she began to attack.

Sukaime-to unshealthed herself, her Zanpaktou self that is. She spoke a chant (Idk the chant yet so I couldn't add it .-.) and released her Shikai. The blade of the Zanpaktou fadded away from top to bottom like dust being blown in the wind. The dust then combined to gather and materialized into four shurikens spining rapidly in place and one tonfa held by Sukaime-to. Performing another chant (Which I don't know either) ending in Bankai! The four shuriken glowed blue, which appeared violet in the red sea, and combined together to formed a Fuma shuriken. The tonfa glowed the same hue and shrunk into a scythe, one eighth of an inch (1/8th) and multiplied it self acrossed the sea.

"Hahaha! You think I'm dumb? Stupid!? Do I look like CUPID!?!?"

The fuma shuriken casted it self through the water towards Hai first, then the thousands of miniture scythes followed. Hai flashed steped high into the air to gain distance between him and Sukaime-to, but the attack was to fast, it instantly caught up to him in matter of seconds. The tiny scythes produced wind scythe, pathways of visuable razor sharp winds following the fuma shuriken. But wait? As the attack grew closer the attack slowed down, just enough to get by. Hai began to flash step his way through the buffet of scythes in a zig zag mannor, he avoided the fuma shuriken on the first flash step. By the time he reached the Jello sea he was through with the terror. His green Gotei 13 uniform was barely intact, cuts and tears made there mark on the outfit and his body. Hai was covered in blood and bearly able to stand. He was shocked non of his limbs were severed, he focused mainly on avoidind his head from being decapitated. Hai's body began to slowly sink into the jello sea like quick sand. Sukaime-to swamed to the water surface and made her body slowly rise beside Hai's. She placed her hand along his face.

"You lied to me... She beganed but paused dramaticly. The white of her eyes turned pink and the tears that rolled from her eyes were reder than the sea. "...a few hundred years ago we made a promise. If you said you loved me then I'll show you your Shikai." She continued to rise as Hai sank. Hai prepared to speak but couldn't, he was nose deep in jello while Sukaime-to was now only knee high. Using her ankles as leverage, he pushed himself up and dragged her down until they both was waist deep in the water. He then held her close to him. Her placed her head on his chest.

"I didn't lie. Hai replied.

"You did and I would have killed you by now if your touch wasn't intoxicating my mind."

Hai pushed him self across the jello sea, using her as leaverage thrusting himself back.

"You never allowed me to finish, fool. I don't love you in that state of mind. Nor do I even like you when you get like that. But I do love you...like a father loves his lustful daughter." Hai held out his hand, he was neck deep now while Sukaime-to failed to rise or sink. She just appeared star struck. She grabbed his hand and was pulled towards him. He then kissed her on the forehead. She then dissapeared. Hai appeared on top of the sea as the whole world changed from crimson-red to clear sky-blue. It then began to rain on this beautiful sunny world without a cloud in site. Hai looked down to see a fuma shuriken in his hand.

"So this is my Bankai?" Hai said, "Not too fancy, just the way I like it.."

[center]~~~[center]

Hai opened his eyes, his training session with his Zanpaktou was complete.

((OOC: Trying out for Squad 7 Captain. I didn't proff read this so sorry for typos >.> it's really late right and I'm tired))


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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:26 am

I'll go ahead and approve for A rank captain. ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:48 pm

I am trying out to be 10th Captain or 5th Espada, whichever one needs to get filled first, but not both. Smile

Ketsuke whirled about. The sounds of hollows wreaking havock upon the town behind her had started so suddenly and caught her off guard. She gripped her Zanpaku-to hilt, and shun-po'ed to the scene. A huge mass of hollows had gathered upon the town in the world of the living, harvesting souls from those humans that had particularly high spiritual pressure. The first few that noticed her were easily dispatched with kido, and some basic zangitsu skills, but they were only the small fry. A hollow in the center of the pack seemed to be controlling their movements... Ketsuke knew he was strong just by looking at him. He saw her and laughed.
"So, they send a little girl to deal with us?! What a load of crap! Women should not be allowed to be Captains because they are weak!" He continued his rantings, but Ketsuke only focused on her Zanpakuto. Twirling it in her hand by the hilt. She cleaved the ground twice in an X pattern, then held the point to her assailant.
"Rip open the sky and growl your defiance! ToraHisan!" Her Zanpaku-to suddenly changed, becoming bladed bracers on her arms. Using shun-po, she demolished the other hollows, then attacked the middle one. His hierro was a bit thick, but she was determined to kill him without using her Bankai. She eventually did cut his arm off, but he bolted back into Hueco Mundo before she could kill him. However, the city was safe, and Ketsukei returned back to the squad barracks for drinking with Rangiku.

My tryout for Espada 5:

Ketsuke laughed as the soul reaper before her was impaled upon her zanpaku-to. He didn't stand a chance. Her green eyes flashed as more of them arrived. As entertaining as they were, she was getting irritated by the sheer number of them.
"You lot are persistant! Looks like I've got to get serious." She swung her Zanpaku-to about and tossed it up, catching the blade in her teeth.
"Crap! She's going to release! Stop her!" They rushed her, but it was too late.
"Grieve, ToraHisan!" Great feathered wings grew out of her back, and a long, tri-bladed tail whipped about, cutting anything that wasn't moving. Her nails became long and sinister, and the rest of her body had changed to look like a great she-tiger. Ketsuke ripped the Soul-reapers about for a bit, but her boredom soon set in and she returned to naromal. "Geez... You guys don't even put up a fight, do you?" With that, she left back to her home in Hueco Mundo.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:42 pm

Given the lack of detail, I cannot accept you for either of the ranks you requested. :/ Maybe it would be better to start out as a lieutenant, seated officer, or fraccion until you get used to the place. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:36 pm

"The kindered sould is a lively one, but not always wise. . . ."

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The daunting sun of the mid-day's summer heat starred down upon the two beings that walked down Main Street, Gluadshire England, trading remarks, and enjoying conversation. As it seemed, their day could't possibly shift in mood, the taste of a fine meal still saturated both sets of lips, the last morsels of gravy slowly dripped down the backs of their throats. It was all for celebration, for both employment and love.

The one that we will be concentrated on, you might be able to imagine, with oddities and all, he stands roughly around six foot, five inchs, a lengthy fellow at one hundred fifty pounds, or at least that's what his doctor informed him that he was at; but that's the terrible thing, he isn't too bright, and extremely gullible, you could have boughten his house off of him with an "I.O.U" note and he would have thought nothing of it, but that's who he is, or should we say, "was". He aside from his spidery build, there were still more oddities to the man's body, due to a few head injuries, his eyes were inexplictably "knocked" to the back of his skull, they both still worked, actually better than most, but it gave him the appearance of having no eyes what-so-ever in his skull, but that ailment was remedied by his occasional wearing of artificial eyes; and oddly enough, the blows to his head changed his natural hair tone, it had gone from a glorious black, to a vibrant blue, lighting up towards the tips, and darkening at the roots, to a near purple.

The person that he was with was some blonde "bimbo" from America, the two had been seeing each other for the past year. She was in it for the moneys, he was in it for the passion, and that is what blinded the you man from her wicked ways. He was a passionate muscian, and it showed, he produced albums with his band more often than not, each having at least two hit singles each, and that was the purpose of this celebration; not only did he just release a new album, but also, it was the two's aniversary. How they planned the day out was simple, they were to meet for lunch, enjoy a walk about Gluadshire, separate for a few, so they could both get ready for the night a head, and they were thus following the plan as such. But, as for the man, things were about to get thrown upside-down, and ontop of their heads,
"Bye, Cin'f'ia," The man said in a heavy cockney accent, his voice was rather high-pitched for a man, but not too bad, due to a mixture of accent, broken teeth, and bad dentistry, the poor man pronounced the "th-" sound, with an "f-", "Be safe on your way home." He with a certain tone of caution,

"Don't worry, Stu, I'll be sa'th'e. . . . " Cinthia said mockingly, as she began turning towards the east. The man, refered as to Stu, sighed gently, and hung his head slightly, stuffing his hands into the pockets of his light-blue skinny jeans, continuing to walk straight ahead after the good-byes were said. He may have not been the brightest bulb in the house, but he knew when he was being made fun of, and the occurance began happening more and more often, but he generally just wiped it from his mind. Ten minutes had passed since he had departed from Cinthia, and his mind was on to better things than being insulted. He began thinking of the festivities of the night, where they were to go and what he was going to wear, he usually would have been fine wearing what he was at the moment, a baggy, white and orange striped muscle shirt, his skinnies, cream colored Converse high tops, and his favorite hat, a gulligan style sun hat with the top cut out of it, and the price tag still attached to the rim; but, Cinthia insisted that he went and got on something more professional the night before.

It was now time for things to go haywire, in a lack of a better word. Stu was deep in thought about the night, paying attention to nothing but the world, three feet around him. He picked up his left foot, and before he knew it, it hit him. A delivery truck made our friend into a musical pancake. He was dead before all the tires had came to a screeching hault thirty feet away. Stu had slowly risen to his feet, confused, a pounding headache, and such,

"It feels like some'f'in' big and 'eavy ran ov'a m'ah head. . . ." Stu silently grumbled, running his fingers through his azure rooted hair,

"That's because something did, kid. . . ." An ominous voice called out from behind Stu, and with it being said, Stu turned about on the head of a dime to face the voice. Taking in the view, Stu was blunder-fucked at the sight, a rather portly black man, wearing a silken, black kimono with white trim, carrying a large sword,

"So, does that mean I'm going to miss my date t'a night?" Stu asked absent mindedly, as he did so often in life, and the black man gave him a rather serious glare,

"You are dead, ain't no more dates. . . . You must be stupider than a box of rocks, kid. . . . " The man retorted, rather annoyed, but with that having just corresponded, the man released his blade from it's shieth, and pointed it at Stu. Stu's natural reaction was to lift his arms over his face, and close his eyes. the man touched the tip of his blade to a chain that had attached itself to Stu's chest from between the time he had died and then. Suddenly, even with his closed eyes, Stu was blinded by a white light, but with that, his headache was gone, and he was no longer on the plain of the living. . . .

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:35 pm

What position are you trying out for?

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:38 pm

soul reaper, higher rank, not captain though

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:39 pm

Well if it isn't a captain, the highest he can start off at is C rank. >_<

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:43 pm

well, am i worthy of captain's rank. . . . i mean, 2D isnt exactly smart enough to be captain, but it could have been a fluke, right? stranger things have happen

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:58 pm

It's the system though. Only captains can have a B rank or higher. There is one way I could make an acception though. Your character would have to be rogue, and this would be the only character that could start off at an A-B rank through tryouts. Any other characters that you run later on would have to start at C and work their way up to higher ranks by gaining points. :/

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:18 am

((Trying out for Captain Soifon))

Walking through the woods was a relatively petite woman with gray eyes and black hair. Her hair is worn short with two long braids bound in white cloth, each ending in a large golden ring. She wears a traditional Shinigami captain's uniform with a sleeveless haori and a yellow obi tied around her waist, her haori swaying gently with each step that made contact with the ground below it. The sun was shining high in the sky but it's light was half-way blocked by the clouds lazily floating above, there was a calm yet powerful breeze blowing which rustled some of the branches of the trees surrounding her some of them broken because she stepped on them. She had decided that since she had finished her paperwork she would do some training deep in the woods, her steps were calm yet they seemed hasted, almost as if she was in a hurry to get where she wanted to go, like she had some stress she wanted to work out. Eventually she came to a small clearing deep in the woods, it seemed secluded and devoid of any life what so ever, in the middle of the field were two logs standing up with pictures of both Kisuke and Shinji.


She grabbed her Kunai from where she kept them hidden on her uniform and threw them at the portraits of Urahara and Hirako, landing multiple hits on the pictures with such accuracy that they all landed within mere inches of each other, she than spoke under her breath "I hate you Kisuke Urahara and Shinji Hirako you will die." Her words carried venom as they left her mouth, fiercely bitter to these two men who indirectly caused her problems, she than walked over to the logs and removed the throwing knives from the pictures, both pictures now had holes in the faces of the two men . Then one of her officers came and said, "Captain Soifon you have more paper work to do." He sounded tense and stiff, though given the fact his captain seemed to be in a bad mood that was to be expected. Soifon than said coldly “Fine just stay out of my way while we head back you fool." Soifon than flash stepped back to the Squad 2 Barracks.


She went back into her office to find the work the subordinate had spoken of and went back to filling out paper work for her squad, it was a tall stack but at the least it was only one which meant she could finish it quickly and possibly return to her training. While filling out her papers her Lieutenant Omaeda was eating rice crackers and standing over her as if he were observing her working, it was a very disturbing feeling, as he munched some of the crumbs of the crackers fell into the hair and she scowled. Soifon annoyed and angered punches him and kicks him repeatedly, she says to him "Idiot how many times to do I have to tell you to keep your rice crackers out of my hair. If you want to die just go get eaten by a hollow." She says to him in disgust, having always been annoyed by the over-sized fat man.

She takes her hand through her hair and combs the crumbs from her raven strands, she turns then to face Omaeda and orders with a death glare “Go and sweep the outside of our barracks you fool I seen non-seated officers more useful than you." Soifon spat, it was unclear if her mood worsened simply because of Omaeda and how much he annoyed her, or if she was stressed from something else on her mind. After some time she finished the last bit of paper work, she gets up and says to one of her subordinates, “Give this to Squad 1 and that’s an order not a request.” She orders sternly, her subordinate bows and replies with a short “yes, Captain." Before leaving her presence completely, wishing to be quick and finish the order given to avoid any punishment which could potentially befall upon him.


After the officer left Soifon took her own leave and decided to take a small walk to help clear her over stressed mind, she stops in front of a bench sitting outside the Manor of the Kuchiki and sits down, leaning her head back towards the sky and closing her eyes gently. Thinking to herself that she needs a replacement Lieutenant but he did have some use, even if he was a idiot, he did do his work like a good lieutenant so perhaps he could stay a while longer...Till she finally had the last straw and deposes him from her ranks. After some silence she gets up from her seat on the bench and begins to walk back to her barracks, stopping off only to grab a quick dinner which was a garden salad and some green tea which helped some of her nerves. Upon returning she sees Omaeda had made a mess of her office while she was out, she growled quietly before yelling in deep anger, “OMAEDA!! You idiot clean my office up now or you will die right here and now!” Omaeda out of fear comes running clumsily into her office and frantically cleans up Soifon’s office, she watched him with a cold glare before turning her eyes to the window, with a soft sigh she utters, “I will begin my hunt for a new lieutenant tomorrow..
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:31 am

Hueco Mundo, the home to hollows and arrancars alike, all of different sizes, appearence, and power. It was surely not a place for humans, even shinigami would not find this place suitable for living. But surely enough there was someone that went againstt he warnings and went into Hueco Mundo. Sesshomaru Asashi, a former shinigami and leutinent of the soul society. Casted out because of his aquiring of hollow powers, he is now labeled a visord. Though it has been centuries, the former shinigami had the appearence of a nintheen or twenty year old. His appearence gave off such a prideful and arrogant auroa. Having to be the type to pride himself on being such a great and powerful being, he rarely exhibit to much of his power. That is why he was angered by the fact of not being accepted to be a shinigami captain, even when he aquired bankai and was such a great canidate. That was the main reason why he even set out to aquire hollow powers, allong with wanting to do as he please.

Walking along the sands of Hueco Mundo, Sesshomaru showed to not have a care in the world. At first glance, one may assume that he was a arrancar, but he wasn't. His odd appearnce gain so much attention. Being a male of his stature, he would of been insulted if he wasn't recognize. Standing at a height just one inch past six feet and weigthing one hundred and sixty seven pounds, Sesshomaru was surely not the biggest. With knee lenght sillver hair and bangs that curved around a cresant shape tattoo upon his forehead; he surely had a strange appearence. Having pointy wolf like ears, sharp claws upon his finger tips, and two magenta stripes upon his cheeks. His golden amber irisis glowed under the moon like light of Hueco Mundo, giving him a sutile, but fearful appearence. At times fangs would flash when ever his mouth open, as well as the sound of his hilt hitting his armor. His facial appearence was not the only thing wierd about him, his attire was as well. This consisted of armor that includes a spiked pauldron that covers his left shoulder attached to the upper section of his cuirass. Both his armor and his long flowing sash have a decided Chinese influence, as opposed to the customary Japanese armor and sash. His Kimono is mostly white with a red chrysanthemum flower crest at the collar and sleeves,showing that he is of royal birth. He wears Sashinuki Hakama, a type of traditional flowing Japanese pants, which are gathered at the ankles producing the "ballooning" effect. His footwear consists of flat pointed ankle-high boots, also reminiscent of Mainland influence.

What would seem like years was simply a few weeks, since Sesshomaru had traveled to Hueco Mundo. Deciding to use the dimension as a form of training by using the hollows as pratice for raising his power and control of his visord mask. He hasn't spoke much since coming, all he carried was a emotionless exppression, and his two faternal twin zanpakuto, Bakusaiga and Tenseiga. Though he hasn't release them much since coming. Traveling, he actually has been looking for a fraccion he fought not to long ago. It seems the weak arrancar vanish after Sesshomaru followed him here, through the same gargantua. The entire time, Sesshomaru was waiting for more hollows to appear, as he walked. Having to feel bored, he realize that he had no excitment unless he was engaging in some form of action. As odd as it was, he always got what he wanted. In mere seconds, around ten to fiftheen hollows and menos appeared in a circled formation around him. Coming to a stop, some may say they saw a slight momentary smirk form upon his lips, which is supprisisng because of his expressionless appearence. "You neantheralls take to long, but i guess i can have some fun with you." he exclaims as he was some what ammused. Bringing up his right arm as he scratch the tips of his claws together. As poisen release in small fragmented drips. Looking to his right, his gaze went to four of the hollows.

"I guess you all are first... he states as he vanishs. Appearing before one as his claws glowed a bright green. "Poison Claw" he yells out as he scratch at the mask of one of them. The hollows body disentigrating as he look to the others. "Next? he calls out as he flashstep multiple times. Scratching at the other three as each disentigrated between five second intervals. As he did that ten more hollows and menos appeared. "The more the merrier. he exclaims as he lowered into a standard stance. The index finger tip of his nail touching upon the cresant on his forehead. "Guess i can show a fragment of my power." he states as hollow mask formed before his face. Its appearence was no suprised, it was the appearence of a wolfs face. Three magenta stripes were on the the cheeks of his mask, a full moon upon his forehead as it shape the appearence of his own. His index and middle finger press together as they once again glowed a bright yellow. A Whip of light formed as he motioned his arm in a circular motion. Heading off in a slow pace, he seem to want to taunt the hollows. As he ran he relied on his reflexes as his body dodge the onzgcoming punches of the hollows. At the same time he pierce their body with his whip of light as the poison sting also disentigrated their body. This course on as all the hollows were slaughtered, at one time he even rip off the arms of a few demenstrating his strenght as he only leaving the menos. Going to a stop, Sesshomaru did not show any sign of fatigue his body not showing any marks and his attire not being teared or damage.

"Well, there only leaves you all." he states in the ripple like hollow tone his mask brings? His amber irisis shifting about upon the black background of his now altered oculars. The menos being blank when it comes to intelligence only releasing their loud and irritating screeches. One thing they were able to do was charged their ceros and release them point blank towards a cornered Sesshomaru. With a explosion coursing a loud shockwave like sound, rippling the sands of Hueco Mundo as well. Once the dust cleared, there was no Sesshomaru in sight. Simply because Sesshomaru was above them, his attire slightly disfigured with ash marks but still unscathed he was. "Now that was pitiful, there is no place in this world for such weakness." he states as he rose his left index finger as a red ball like cero formed. Taking seconds to charge, the cero pierce down onto three of the menos, ripping them in half as well as disentigrating their bodies. He did the same to the rest as they disentigrated and vanish. Now left alone, he glided down in a slow pace before his boots touch upon the sand. His hollow mask vanished as Sesshomaru press on through the sands of Hueco Mundo.

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:50 am

@Terra: Approved for A-Rank Soifon, don't forget to apply her points and make her barracks ect ^^ I think the last guy might still have his up, if that's true lemme know and I'll archive 'em.

@JD: I can't even begin trying to read that last block of text x.x Alright..I'll go ahead and approve you for Visored Sesshomaru. ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:59 am

Thanks Kizo.


Um question where do I have to go to apply her points and make her barracks? and where would the last guy have his?
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PostSubject: Re: Tryouts (RP Samples Here!)   Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:07 am

Welcome..Okay, go to the Forum "RP System" then if you haven't, read up on the stat system, after that go to the Cannon Stat thread and appply her points there.

As for her Barracks, they get made in the Seireitei sub-forum of Soul Society ^.^ That's where the other guy would have his thread.

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